Hey,
I hope you guys are doing well.
The thing is... I have been receiving some comments and reviews (s) as well about the story being abrupt.
I accept that the initial phase, which undoubtedly is the most crucial one, is rushed and less worded.
My bad.
It's actually the effect of another story I have been writing alongside this one that affected my writing style.
I just jumped from scene to scene with less to no proper introduction to the characters and their background.
Well, in recent chapters I have tried to write more words and have been trying to detail characters.
But one thing I would like to clarify.
I am not introducing any mystery which I would leave unsolved. It's just that everything, is connected to a single fact and that would be revealed after a certain period.
Please be patient with the story, and give it another chance if you are reading this message but have walked out.
As I always have said, I am constantly trying to improve so please be a little patient with me.
Thank you.